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07.09.2025 17:28
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Write a science fiction story up to 1 author page and get a chance to be included in a collective collection and get reviewed by renowned authors.

Jury of the contest

Alexander Svistunov
Fantasy writer, member of the Union of Writers of Uzbekistan and the Council for Adventure and Fantastic Literature of the Union of Writers of Russia.

Katerina Popova
A modern writer working in the genre of mysticism, fantasy and adventure thriller. The author does not deprive her works of lightness, humor and self-irony.

Maria Kucherova
Poet and prose writer from Tashkent. The author works in the genres of mysticism, drama and thriller, creates a series of novels and novellas in a single fictional universe.

Konstantin Normaer
A writer working at the intersection of genres: from fantasy detective and steampunk to dark fantasy and mystical realism.

Yana Gros
Writer-prose writer, the main direction - grotesque, social satire, reaction to the processes that are happening today. Laureate and diploma winner of international competitions.

Jerome
Author of the "Lost Worlds" series, specializing in space fiction and time travel. Author of numerous science fiction stories.

Artyom Gorokhov
Artem Gorokhov
Writer-prose writer, author of novels and many works of small prose. The head of seminars of creative community of poets and prose writers.

Olga Sergeyeva
Author of the collection of fantastic stories "Signal". Master of science fiction and mysticism, exploring time, memory and the limits of human possibilities.

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12.08.2025 18:44
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On Sale!

Echo of Destruction is a new post-apocalyptic novel
Zoya Biryukova.

A post-catastrophe world, an ancient war between vampires and werewolves, and a ritual that will decide the fate of humanity.


Zoya Biryukova is a gamer and dark fantasy fan. Her love for the worlds of vampires and werewolves inspired her to create her own story about the post-apocalypse and ancient powers.

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02.07.2025 20:55
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Already on sale!

A new story from Katerina Popova in a mystical novel


Anybody Alive? - Katerina Popova read online

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Comments

Ещё раз повторю, что текст никакой ИИ обработке не подвергается. Визуальное оформление - баннеры, постеры, иллюстрации - остаётся за администрацией. Так было всегда с 2017 года, сейчас это прописано более явно в Пользовательском соглашении.

Если иллюстрация не нравится, то напишите нам и мы найдём компромис.

Рассказ снят с конкурса, автору желаем удачи в его творческом пути.
21.10.2025 Jaaj.Club
Добрый день,

Тоже обратила внимание, что изменилась обложка моей работы. Отчасти я понимаю желание сохранить общую концепцию для всех конкурсных работ, но все же мне кажется, что тогда это нужно было объявлять изначально, а не менять все задним числом.

Более того, для моего рассказа настоящей художницей была специально отрисована обложка. И эту обложку не просто удалили без предупреждения (это бы я еще поняла), но еще и прогнали через бездушный ИИ и поставили обратно, нанеся сверху не самый профессиональный текст.

Такое потребительское отношение нарушает буквально все этические творческие нормы.

И мне обидно сейчас вовсе не за себя, а именно за художницу, которая старалась, тратила время, придумывала концепт, подбирала референсы и палитры, чтобы результаты ее труда уничтожили одной (двумя, тремя — неважно) кнопками.

Вы же сами буквально прописываете в правилах запрет на использование ИИ, и при этом сами делаете то же самое и даже хуже. Думаю, ни одному автору не понравилось бы, если их бы их текст прогнали через ИИ и выложили обратно "для единой концепции".


Не хочу ни с кем ругаться, но надеюсь, что мои слова будут услышаны и правильно восприняты на будущее.

Я же снимаю свою работу с конкурса и прошу убрать ее из списка на конкурсной странице.

21.10.2025 anna_ro
Это очень классный рассказ, я прочитала одним духом! Такое напряжение! Понравилась выдуманная игра, надо же, придумали ради рассказа. Интересная метафора.
21.10.2025 SolarMap
Жестоко, но фантастично и грамотно :-) спасибо, хорошая работа
20.10.2025 Formica
Благодарю Вас за добрые слова!Мне очень приятно🥰Пусть с Вашей лёгкой руки и другие люди получат удовольствие от прочтения!

A Furry Detective, Cheese in a Mousetrap, and Parrots.

10.09.2024 Рубрика: Stories
Автор: Elizaveta3112
Книга: 
11723 0 0 13 657
Sonia had been dreaming of a parrot for years, and she had been begging her parents for a parrot for a long time. By the way, Sonia needed not just any parrot, but a parrot that could be taught to talk, or, at least, an older talking parrot that had been left without an owner. And so, finally, Sonia waited, and her parents promised her a parrot, which was to be a birthday present. If they had known where this would lead.....
A Furry Detective, Cheese in a Mousetrap, and Parrots.
фото: pixabay.com
Yes, it's me again, and today I'm going to tell you about one of my strangest cases. You've already heard the name of it, and you probably didn't understand it.

- Well, yes, we know the saying about free cheese in a mousetrap, - you will say - but what is the connection between cheese - real or from the proverb - and parrots?

I thought so too but... It will all make sense now.

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My host parents have friends. And they have an eight-year-old daughter, Sonechka. Sonechka is infinitely kind and madly loves all animals. If you've seen anyone like her, you know that such children usually dream of a pet. Someone about someone specific, and someone about anyone. Sonia had been dreaming about a parrot for years and had been begging her parents for a parrot for a long time. By the way, Sonia needed not any parrot, but a parrot that could be taught to talk, or, in the extreme case, a grown-up talking parrot that had been left without an owner. And so, finally, Sonia waited, and her parents promised her a parrot, which was to be a birthday present. If they had known where this would lead.....

No, for Sonia's birthday she did get a present - a talking parrot. But... it never made it to the mistress. It turned out that most of the words that this parrot knew were swear words, and such that I will not even repeat them. And of course, Sonja's parents immediately called my owners, and we immediately rushed to help.

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Valera and I listened to the parrot story again, but we didn't really understand what we could do here. And then I saw a newspaper open on an article that seemed to me to be about parrots. I called out to the owner:

- R-wow!

Valera came over, quickly studied the article, and said:

- Well done, Thomas!

- Did you find something? - Sonin's father Eugene came up to us.

- Yes, an article about a talking parrot - replied Valera - By the way, lived not far from here.

Eugene looked at the headline:

A multi-child family had their talking parrot stolen.

The article was about the Metlyaev family, whose eldest daughter, Lyuba, had a birthday, she was six years old. The family lived quite modestly, and in order to please Lyuba, who had also long dreamed of a parrot, they saved up money for months.

- You have all heard stories about parrots that were bought at the market as gifts for children from a person who took them from an unknown place and then turned out to be vicious and would not contact anyone," Lyuba's father said. - In addition, these parrots often turned out to be adults.

The Metlyaevs went on to say that the thieves had broken into the apartment when not only they themselves, but even none of the neighbors were at home. By the way, they only stole the parrot, they didn't touch anything else. And here's what alerted me: this parrot was stolen right before they bought Sonia's parrot. It was less than a week later. And I wasn't the only one.

- What did the first owners of this parrot say? - Valera asked - Why did they decide to give it away?

- And we did not see them - answered Eugene - two men gave it to us ...

- And they didn't know anyone from the parrot's family, did they? - Valera asked.

Everything was clear without words: Sonya was going to get a parrot, which had been stolen from Lyuba.

Why was he taught to swear? Most likely, the robbers did it by accident. But what to do now? After all, this parrot could not only be given to Sonya, but also returned to Lyuba.

- The main thing is to decide what to do with Lubin's parrot - sighed Sonia's mother - and we'll figure it out ourselves.

And then Valera asked:

- And who in our city deals with parrots?

In this way it was possible to help everyone. With the help of the newspaper I told you about, we called the zoo, where we found a parrot expert. He helped us decide what to do in all three cases: for Sonia he found a parrot that was still quite small, but already spoke a few words; Luba was given one that had been returned by the first owners (and she never found out that it was the wrong parrot). And the parrot that cussed, the breeder kept it. For re-education. And I want to give you advice: be careful with parrots! See you again!

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