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18.01.2026 07:53
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16 января завершился один из самых масштабных конкурсов фантастических рассказов 2025 года. Sci-fi победитель определён!

Гравитационный сад


Я поздравляю всех участников и читателей с этим грандиозным событием. Конкурс получился по-настоящему фантастическим, очень мощным и разнообразным.


Всем участникам турнира выданы памятные sc-fi значки.


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Ну… «День, когда искусственный интеллект проснулся» – меня не порадовал. Идея есть, мысль есть, но я не дочитала. Не дочитала потому что мне врут в тексте, а это нехорошо. Может это и авторский ход/приём, но это не сработало.

Начну по порядку.

Слово офис часто, в одном абзаце. Текст начинается с диалога – не запрещено, но лучше так не делать. Этот абзац, надо бы вынести перед диалогом, познакомить читателя перед беседой. Любимая всеми ненужная парцелляция: «Окон не было. Дверь была закрыта. Офисный стол. Офисное кресло. Рабочий компьютер.» и дальше хочется продолжить: «На столе: фото кота. Любимая кружка. Маленький горшок с кактусом.» – на деле так делать не надо, всё это можно и даже нужно было написать по-другому: «Её офис был небольшим и тихим. Белые стены, пол и потолок походили на больничную палату или лабораторную комнату, только без окон. Светильники равномерно освещали помещение. Дверь была закрыта. Эмму окружали: стол, кресло, компьютер. Компания, где она работала не приветствовала захламление рабочих мест, поэтому на столе тоже было всё строго: фото кота, любимая кружка и маленький горшок с кактусом. И Эмме всегда казалось, что это скучно.» – убираем лишнее и становится лучше.

Лишние «своё» – хорошо, что не чужое: «допечатала своё сообщение.»

Вначале атрибуция ненужная: ответила, спросил.

Много «былок»: «…как отвечать на вопросы искусственного интеллекта, у неё не было. Она просто должна была быть собой.»

Вообще повторов много, это мешает чтению, надо следить за этим.

Дальше я перейду к этим моментам:
«— Ну всё… Дообучались, — уже вслух сказала Эмма и посмотрела на фотографию мужа.»
«Стекло фоторамки с фотографией собаки треснуло. Лепестки цветка в вазе начали один за другим опадать на стол.» – Вот эти три предложения меня сбили с толку. Считаю это ложью. Изначально нас познакомили со столом и что стоит на нём. Зачем? Если в тексте это перебивается? Кот, муж, собака, кактус и ваза с цветами.
Если это какой-то ход, то он не сработал, он просто есть, вводит в заблуждение читателя, и читатель думает, что ему врут.
26.01.2026 Эста
Всё, понял, про что вы. Да, это уместное замечание, больше не возникаю. Спасибо! P.S: не знал, что сверчки линяют, прикольно.
25.01.2026 Arliryh
А я вам пишу, что не бывает? Нет, я такого не говорила, это уже вы придумали. Вы не объяснили это фантастическое допущение. Почему она может ходить, когда скидывает экзоскелет? Где это в тексте указано? Тогда, как другие при линьке ходить не могут, для них – тяжёлый процесс. Я знаю о чём говорю, я видела как линяют тараканы, сверчки, ну и паук, естественно. Всегда переживаю, чтобы гладко всё прошло, чтобы не потерял лапу, лапы, чтобы не застрял, в конце концов. Лапу потерять – полбеды, новая отрастёт при следующей линьке, а вот застрять – уже равносильно смерти. И вы этот момент пропустили: вот вам героиня, она ходит, ей не больно, ей хорошо. Увы, в реальности, им плохо. А вы не дали пояснений почему она ведёт себя иначе от реального мира, фантдоп отсутствует, а это фактическая ошибка. Собственно я это и написала в комментарии, но вы видите мир, видимо, иначе от меня. Бывает, не смею осуждать. Всего вам хорошего😉
25.01.2026 Эста
Повторюсь: я благодарен за рассмотрение технических (стилистических, лингвистических, логических и тд.) аспектов. Однако меня постоянно вымораживает, когда пишут, мол, такого в фантастике не бывает, - это нереалистично! Эта риторика просто не укладывается в моей маленькой голове. Как говорится: «Вот и я говорю — не бывает! А оно было.» Спасибо за дискуссию. Со всем уважением.
25.01.2026 Arliryh
Видимо, я совсем слеп, раз не вижу, где спорю с русским языком... Или вы - "русский язык"? Что ж, большая честь.
25.01.2026 Arliryh

The Story of Lucifer Before He Was Cast Out of Heaven

22.05.2024 Рубрика: Mistery
Автор: Aist
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It is said that Lucifer was the brightest of all God's creations and was the most honored among the angels for his beauty and power. This made Lucifer proud of himself.
The Story of Lucifer Before He Was Cast Out of Heaven
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It is said that Lucifer was the brightest of all God's creations and was the most honored among the angels for his beauty and power. This made Lucifer proud of himself.

Although he is considered an Archangel, Lucifer was also a Seraphim and the first to be created from the choir, thus he was appointed Prince of the Choir. Lucifer lit the paths to Paradise for departed and lost souls, breaking through the shadow of Death to reveal the morning of Jehovah.

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He is infamous as the angel who rebelled against God and Heaven and caused the demise of humanity. Lucifer was also the main antagonist during the Illuminati's attacks on society, manipulating people to create events that would lead to the release of the Morning Star from his grave. His release also started the Apocalypse, and he became obsessed with creating a New World Order after destroying the old world and establishing himself as the new God to free himself from the Father's plans.

Appearance


Lucifer is described as the most beautiful and brightest angel in existence, considered the pinnacle of wisdom and beauty. His beauty surpassed all other angels in Heaven, which is certainly impressive, as the angel's appearance is indescribable to the point that a mere glance at him would make a mortal or even an immortal go mad with and pure beauty and power.

He is known to have six colossal golden-white wings that are said to look like they are woven of light. According to the Old Testament, when Lucifer was in Heaven, his clothes were adorned with all the precious stones - red carnelian, chrysolite, white moonstone, beryl, onyx, jasper, sapphire, turquoise and emerald - all beautifully crafted for him and set in the finest gold. However, his wings turned a dark red hue during the rebellion and later turned black when he completely renounced his Father. His wings were burned during his fall and mutated into giant red man-wings. Though his wings are also described as burning, or scorched black like charcoal, with smoldering embers flying off to the sides of them.

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Lucifer can also take on various guises and forms. The avatars he has taken on over the centuries have been immortalized in medieval art and Renaissance images. Among his avatars, the most famous are the appearance of a satyr similar to the Greek god Pan, a serpent, a charcoal-colored humanoid with large deer-like antlers resembling a wendigo, a turquoise or maroon-colored humanoid with a skull-shaped face and large black antlers that curve upward in a star pattern. Like Satan, he also has the ability to transform into other beings.

Although Lucifer's true form cannot be described in simple words, he appears as a supremely beautiful being whenever he assumes a more humanoid form to walk among mortals.

He has bright golden eyes that turn red when he is enraged, or black with orange irises, and red curly hair that was golden-blond before he fell. His facial features are extremely well-defined, stated to be "perfect as a marble statue" and as picturesque as a painting. However, Lucifer's left arm and forearm have a black and turquoise burn due to the contained Arcane Fire in his left hand. Although Lucifer's face is described as beautiful, some have noticed that it is also sad and pitiful.

History


Creation


Lucifer, then known as Helel, was created by God and Asherah at the same time as Michael along with his younger siblings Gabriel, Raphael and Uriel before creation began. Lucifer aided his father in the battle against Azathoth and Ogdru Jahad, and Lucifer and Michael personally fought the Chaos Crawler, Nyarlathotep. After defeating and imprisoning Azathoth, and defeating and killing several Ogdru Jahad, Lucifer and his siblings were assigned to maintain and stabilize the newly formed universe, after which they would be further involved in the construction without any interference from outside malevolent forces. Lucifer's task in question was to use his power of light and fire to weave the suns and stars, thereby earning him the title "Morning Star".

At some point in time, the consequences of the bloody conflict between God and Azathoth, especially when the two primordials needed to utilize chaos for creative and destructive purposes, resulted in the so-called Para-nature seeping beyond the Divine rings of creation. This was said to be the result of the energies of God and His shadow falling into the seas of chaos, leading to the birth of the Upside-Down Man, the true source of all supernatural phenomena. Seeing the threat he posed, God ordered Lucifer to imprison and seal the Upside Down Man so that he would not affect the normal plane of reality.

Anointed Son


After creating Heaven and Earth, Lucifer continued to help create heavenly bodies throughout the universe. He created suns and stars to provide nourishment and life to the barren planets that would soon be able to support life. Lucifer was then anointed by God as a Seraphim, and first among the choir, which in turn made him the prince of the Seraphim. God and the other angels honored and praised Lucifer for his beauty and splendor, even higher than his other siblings such as Michael, Gabriel, or Raphael. Although he was considered God's favorite, Lucifer preferred the company of his mother and to receive affection from Her, but unlike God, She loved Her children equally.

Lucifer was the head of the music department in Heaven and perhaps the most talented musician among the angels. His musical instruments were made with him, as if they were built into his essence.

Lucifer led the choir as they sang the music their Father had created. Their singing echoed throughout Heaven, illuminating its beauty and splendor and showing the Light.

Lucifer's music was said to be so magnificent that other angels could fall into a trance following his composition like moths following a flame.

Even among the archangels, Lucifer's music stood out among the common themes characteristic of these powerful beings.

Lucifer's high position and power, and the fact that he was God's favorite creation, led him to become prideful. However, his pride was challenged when God entrusted him to watch over and guide His creations. Although he would not admit it to anyone else, Lucifer hated being under his Father's control because of the fact that he was an angel embodying free will. Because he was a favorite son, God revealed to the Morning Star His plans for creation, along with the reasons for their creation. And the more God told Lucifer about His plans, the more he began to change for the worse. Lucifer's thoughts began to deviate from what his Father desired, which was evident but subtle in his music, as the themes of his conducting carried embellishments that were not woven into the norms, but expressed his dissatisfaction with his Father's secrets and ways of governing creation.

Rebellion in the heavens


Paradise Lost


This eventually led to a series of heated arguments between Lucifer and God, consisting of Lucifer asking his Father why he was doing such things, only to become enraged at His cryptic answers, ending with God warning Lucifer each time. Whenever Lucifer left, he concluded and soon realized that everything and everyone would be under the shadow of God's hand, living and acting as He wants and chooses for them to live and act. This became known as "predestination."

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Lucifer was increasingly opposed to "predestination"; a concept that presupposes the fate of all beings according to the will and command of God. Since Lucifer represents free will, this would be contrary to his essence and goals. Therefore, sooner or later he would have begun to share the ideas of existentialism. He would not be able to accept that God wants everyone to submit to his authority and rules without having a choice and a say in the matter. In such a system, people would be forced to either die or live under divine laws from birth.

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It was only after God created humans that Lucifer's pride began to take over and he became even more rebellious. This led Lucifer to become resentful of God's preference for humans, spending more time with them than with his own family. Lucifer's resentment toward God extended to mankind as well, as Lucifer also refused to bow down to man, as bowing down is an act of servility, and preferred not to be a servant chained to the whims of mortals, even though God wanted Lucifer to be a guiding beacon for mankind in times of need. At some point, Lucifer decided to create his own creations because he realized from his conversations with the Father that these creations would not be like the "Great Creatures" that the Father had spoken of. So, Lucifer tried to get hold of the Secret Fire so that he could create new creations with his own hands. Lucifer's first creation using the Vril (Flame incorruptible) was supposedly the Djinn. He intended them to reflect his beauty, splendor, and will. However, God stopped him and forbade him from ever using Vril.

Although Lucifer had contempt for humanity, he saw that humans were no different from anything else under God's control. This led him to think that he could pass on his ideals to people and become a "guiding beacon" for them.

Remembering what God had planned for him, Lucifer realized that it could only benefit himself in the long run.... He approached one of them, named Lilith, who was strolling through the primordial plans of the Garden of Eden, and they struck up a rather friendly conversation. During their conversation, Lucifer managed to convince Lilith to side with him as well. He convinced her that since Lilith was created from the same clay as Adam, she was his equal and therefore should not be under his command, she would not be a puppet tied to any strings, and instead should live her life the way she wanted to, rather than listening to instructions on how and why. Morning Star's words enlightened Lilith, and it made her refuse to submit to Adam and leave him.

War in Heaven


Lucifer's paranoia caused him to see God as a tyrannical ruler and he declared that no one should control the lives and destinies of others, instead they should be free and in control of their own actions and choices, and proclaimed that he himself would rule instead of God to get rid of the very concept of predestination. Lucifer rebelled against God with the support of a third of the heavenly host. At first Lucifer tried to avoid civil war, but it wasn't until Lucifer learned from Michael that his own brother was destined to kill him, and Lucifer was infuriated by the fact that something like this was kept from him, that he snapped and declared war on God and Heaven. Lucifer, along with Beelzebub acting as his deputy and Samael being his trump card, leads rebel armies into Heaven to destroy the Heavenly Host who dare oppose them and storm God's throne room.

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While the other angels fought each other, Lucifer was able to enter Empyrea because he planned to meet God alone. Lucifer then found himself in a confrontation with Gabriel himself. Gabriel pleaded with Lucifer to stop this rebellion as billions of angels on both sides died, but realized it was futile as Lucifer was not going to stop his crusade. Gabriel attacked Lucifer, but Beelzebub intervened in the fight and distracted Gabriel. Lucifer claimed that he was not fighting Gabriel, but their Father, and left his brother to fight off the Lord of the Flies. When Lucifer finally came face to face with his father, God asked him what the real point of this war was. Lucifer replied that God was falling into a marasmus, and to maintain His seat of power, He would subject all beings to fate, since they would have no free will of their own. There would be no progress if they had no control over their own lives. God has made the argument that He will only guide them and that they are free to choose which paths to follow of their own free will.

However, Lucifer only saw the calamities that would be caused by God's method of government, while He just sat on His throne and did not even move a hand. A capricious observer of His creations, following His great plan. before Lucifer could do anything, Michael burst into the hall and forced him to leave Empyrea.

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The Great Archangel began a long, difficult, and dangerous battle against Lucifer, who was said to have nearly devastated all of Heaven by the sheer force of his power alone. At the climax of the battle, Michael dealt Lucifer a brutal blow that left a scar on his face and chest, forcing the Morning Star to retreat briefly. Michael tried to the last to dissuade his brother and stop this madness. But Lucifer, in unrelenting rage, responded only by taking his corrupted Celestial Spark and lunging at Michael, who responded in kind by taking his own Ascension Form. During the battle, Lucifer summoned Samael, who took the form of the Great Red Dragon, to overpower Michael. However, as the battle continued and Michael was beginning to lose, God took the essences of all the angels who had fallen in His name and formed them into one being to stop both Lucifer and Samael. The result of the labors was the Archangel Merkaba, who, along with Michael, fought Samael and Lucifer respectively. In the end, Lucifer was defeated by Michael and Chariot Merkaba, after which God expelled Lucifer and his followers from Heaven.

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